Sun 26 Apr 2009
i am almost finished writing my rough draft and i am feeling a bit unhappy with it. while my final project revolves around the picture i have gathered from what i have read about the women of the HLS, via the salmagundi, i feel like my perceptoin of them has not translated well through this draft. i guess thats why it is considered a first draft. i also wish archives was open on weekends since i forgot to write down page numbers and group numbers so my citations are not complete. in general, i will have a lot of fine tuning to do for my second draft, but thankfully i do not seem to have a problem generating the required 7 pages, seeing as i have gone over that.