“It swelled up louder and louder, a hoarse yell of pain and fear and anger all mingled in the one dreadful shriek. They say that away down in the village, and even in the distant parsonage, that cry raised the sleepers from their beds” (Doyle 150).
This passage is taken from page 150 of Arthur Conan Doyle’s, The Speckled Band. To start, a small phrase that stood out to me was “that cry raised the sleepers from the bed.” This dark imagery allows the reader to fully understand how loud Doctor Roylott’s scream was. (When I closely read this passage, it instantly made me think of Disney Pixar’s, Monster’s Inc, and how sleeping robots would vertically sit up due to the intensity of the Monster’s screams.) But what is Sir Doyle’s purpose for even including the villagers reaction from the distance? This might be crazy, but I think Doyle wanted the readers to believe that everyone in the village was afraid of Doctor Roylott, not just his two step-daughters. When it raises the sleepers from their bed, it portrays the trauma everyone has from his evil crimes. The author wants us to know that Doctor Roylott was evil enough to traumatize people outside of his family. This relates to the plot of the novel as a whole, because it adds the question of whom the scream may be from? There is a chance it is from the man who deserves to die, and that would give a thrill to the reader. That thrill is the exact purpose Conan has when writing a sensational novel, thus his reason for including the villagers awakening.
Another interesting part of this excerpt is the way the word “anger” is being used. There was anger in the Doctor’s scream right before he died. Doyle’s decision to sneak in this word helps the reader to better understand Doctor Roylott’s short-tempered personality throughout the story. There were several other instances where Roylott lost his mind quickly. For example, when he finds out Holmes and Watson are investigating Miss. Stoner, he flips instantly. Anger is included in this description, and matters, because it amplifies the grand finale on the Doctor’s demise. As a reader, Conan writes this story to make out Roylott to be the antagonist, with flawed morals, and an evil fixation with killing people. The reader starts to hate him, because who wouldn’t? The author includes that one final lengthy scream because when it finally stops, and the reader realizes the evil man is dead- they feel a sense of relief! This excited feeling the reader now gets along with Roylott’s noticeable anger from his failure boosts the “sensation” we get as readers seeing the antagonist fall.