The writer of this paper fulfills the requirements of the rubric very well and structured his/her essay properly to make the essay clear and easy to understand.
The topic sentence is set up well by the rest of the intro paragraph. By the time the reader gets to the topic sentence, he/she has a good understanding of the situational context. The sentence itself is concise, but very clear and describes effectively what the paper will be focusing on. The thesis is proven relevant by answering “so what?” and it is also an arguable statement.
The position of the author is well defined and clear. Evidence is effectively used to clarify points. The author analyzes a wide variety of resources to prove his/her points. The numerous resources are also properly cited.
The sources are well placed and agreeing with the claims made by the author. They effectively convey and respond to the points analyzed in the document.
Very few errors in the document overall, grammatically or structurally. The document appears to be very well-revised (probably three times at least).
The document also does a good job of maintaining my attention.
Overall, the paper was very well structured, well revised, and analyzes an interesting, arguable point.